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Memory Of Her Boyfriend
Contributed by
xDiSaStErPiEcEx
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Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 04:25:42 PM in AEST
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Aa her black hair falls,
Down into her view.
Shes crying and screaming.
Thinking what else can i do?
She punches the wall,
As she sings to the sound.
Turns the radio up,
And falls to the ground.
It's her boyfriends song,
The one who has died.
The one she still misses,
And for who she still cries.
As she slowly sits up,
And the songs starts to end.
She can't help but to think,
How she lost her best friend.
So she picks up the razor,
Slides it against the bluest vein.
In hoping that when she does,
It will finally end her pain.
She can't help but to think,
Is this really right.
But theres nothing she can do,
As shes slwoly losing sight.
She knows she can't go back,
But shes not moving any farther.
The blood is getting thick,
And her light keeps getting darker.
Shes thinking of her memories,
Enjoying thoughts of her past.
A memory of her boyfriend,
This memory was her last.
The End.
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Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 05:05:19 PM AEST
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wow, a tragic kind of love story.
i likehow it flows and how the ending isnt happy, becuase in real life, it almost never is.
you've got potential , keep up the great work! |
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Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend
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by coolbreeze17 on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 10:28:52 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes
very sad very well written
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Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend
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by Craze on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 07:24:58 AM AEST
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| I have read this poem dozens of times and love it each time even more than the last |
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Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend
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by Lilbabe on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 04:25:22 PM AEST
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this was beautifully written...and yet so sad. i love it.
lexy |
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Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend
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by Craze on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 09:36:29 AM AEST
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i dont care what anyone says u have the best poem on this sight i am a fan and will always love this poem.
yours truly,
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