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hello... good-bye
Contributed by
wild_girl121
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Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:02:03 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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when you said hello , was its just to say good-bye ?
good-bye means to leave and forget about all.
something must have struck you hard, i have no
other explanation for your actions... you said it
yourself that you would love me always, then why
does it feel so faint in my mind that it is true.
i will not say good-bye for i do not wish to forget you.
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wild_girl121
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2006-04-16 22:02:03]
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Re: hello... good-bye
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by chaos78 on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:27:51 PM AEST
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| not bad ,alright |
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Re: hello... good-bye
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:43:38 PM AEST
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nice expression, very heartbreaking.
i do feel for you. |
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Re: hello... good-bye
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:00:23 AM AEST
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eh not bad. couldnt really get into it, but it had
some good emotion. all round fine job
diz |
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