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little less forgiving
Contributed by
moldwarp
on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:12:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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what of you judas
and what of me
we toasted
your hand - my thigh
your burning tongue
my docile barren lips
what of you judas
and me?
(far far far from
the good shepherd)
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moldwarp
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2006-04-16 22:12:41]
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Re: little less forgiving
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:37:31 PM AEST
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wow deep stuff.
EXCELLENT work.
i really like. |
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Re: little less forgiving
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by dedpoet on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:47:54 PM AEST
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| That was really good |
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Re: little less forgiving
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by katt on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:58:12 PM AEST
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Gotta be careful with the men and alcohol mix
ture LOL. Just kidding. I enjoyed your poem and I think I can relate. Great job!
Katt |
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