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unfolding
Contributed by
zanobia
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Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 04:32:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i pull the razor across my skin
the memories come flooding back with the blood
the thing i swore i would never do again
is unfolinding right beneath my eyes
when everything is good again i fall into a sleep
a sleep where my subconcious eats at me
telling me i have done wrong
i shout at myself
i knew i didnt want to do it
but it seemed i was in a trance
i swear again and throw the razor away
but my friends betray me, my parents hurt me
and i am in the same position again
pulling the razor across my wirst
tears flowing out of my eyes
and wishing i was somewhere else
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Re: unfolding
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by trini on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 04:40:02 PM AEST
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Your poem touched me.
Brought back old memories.
When your subconcious eats at you, swallow the words.
Through blindless hope and desire to beat the feeling, you will get though it.
I did. Hopefully you do too. Stay undefiled.
Keep up the good work.
-Trini |
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