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Locked in a Cage
Contributed by
whatsername
on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 04:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Locked in a cage
Stuck in a dream
Left without a soul
To hear me scream
Looking up at the sky
Listening to the drone
Waiting for someone else
To fall into this zone
Left with myself
With tears in my eyes
I spin round and round
As my head fills with lies
Why am I here?
Where do I go?
Shall I remain alone?
Is this darkness my foe?
I search in this dusk
I run through this fight
I have only one goal
To again find my light
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whatsername
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2006-04-18 16:47:55]
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Re: Locked in a Cage
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by katt on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:52:26 AM AEST
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Good rhythm and descriptive emotion. Enjoyed it.
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Re: Locked in a Cage
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by Tiffyo4 on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:16:54 PM AEST
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keep up the good work
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Re: Locked in a Cage
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by randumbchit on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 10:54:10 AM AEST
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| good write i enjoyed it emensly |
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Re: Locked in a Cage
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by midnight_writer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 08:26:44 PM AEST
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i love it! it's amazing...i don't know what else to say!
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Re: Locked in a Cage
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by jono on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:55:24 AM AEST
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| I felt sorry for that guy |
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