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Hidden deep beneath
Contributed by
-why_not_let_me_live-
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Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:59:00 AM in AEST
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Its so hard for me to express my feelings, hidden deep inside,
For whenever i try to let them out, they always seem to hide,
And its not from lack of trying, Ive done that many a time,
Even in my poems, its like im trapped by rhyme,
I want to say how i feel, i want to sing outloud,
But when i try i fail you, and barly make a sound,
I can never find the right words, to say whats in my heart,
I know its gonna come out wrong, before i even start,
But what happens when tomorrow comes, and you will not be near,
I think that day is coming fast, the day that i most fear,
For all the people we dont like, are pushing you away,
Secretly i wish they'd leave, so you dont have to stray,
And if you ever read this poem, i hope you realise its you,
For these are things i cannot say, but believe me they are true
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Re: Hidden deep beneath
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by TiaXander on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 04:02:52 PM AEST
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Love it describes exactly how I often feel and words just aren't enough...GREAT WRITE! really connected to this poem of yours:)
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