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The School of Life
Contributed by
katt
on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 12:56:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Born in poverty hard work and long days violence and abuse closed to the eye choices of separation elusive family ties confusion and heartbreak a child learns to cry
Years of despair no friend to be found shuffled from place to place searching for home used for labor and financial gain rights brutally violated bending to authority a girl learns distrust
Marriage and children happiness brings joy giving and receiving the evidence of love teaching and helping the peacemaker speaks the loss of a husband a woman learns pain
Lonely and devastated a heart ripped apart sinking into darkness suicidal thoughts concern for others lifted from the pit dreams come into view a widow learns hope
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2006-04-19 12:56:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The School of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:38:04 PM AEST (User
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Well done, Katt..the Circle Of Life and the lessons learnt....Stay strong.
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Re: The School of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:46:59 PM AEST (User
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If cowboys can be serious, you got syntax down to an art of connecting thought lines overflowing with provocatingly painted clear picture that connects to the second from the back row of the schoolroom of life. In other words, satisfying.
Cause dreams comes into view be granted. It's all part of miracle. |
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Re: The School of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 02:19:57 PM AEST (User
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This is a great poem. It reminds me of my youth as a boy growing up in the city. The closest to this poem from my own life is one called "Here we go again" and "City lullaby" Thanks for sharing your life with us. |
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Re: The School of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 04:43:59 PM AEST (User
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I can so identfy with this..
I remember as a kid the outside toilet and stepping on slugs and snails on the way and sleeping on a P***** stained mattress.
But poverty has positivity....
To the receptive it gives wisdom and paves the way for a better future.
J. |
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