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At the mall
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 03:23:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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I saw you at the mall
where you at
browsing down the jewelry store
i am lost
gone up with the elevator
down the escalator
stole that diamond ring
was that you
i saw wearing blue
or the securing chasing for me
search is off
custody is my middle name
criminal file is a losing game
always a mile apart
just to hand you a diamond ring
so i can win your heart
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2006-04-19 15:23:01]
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Re: At the mall
(User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 12:41:02 PM AEST
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WELL Visualized poem with a perfect pinch of humor, a dash of romance and seasoning it with cop and a speeding chase, a good action packed poem. (dish)
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