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what i see
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:24:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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while you lay there trying to breath
i'm crying on the inside wishing he'd leave
he sit's there like he has a clue
but if he only knew i really love you
your in so much pain
and all i could do was watch
tears roll off you face and you start to turn red
he said i gave you a panic attack
and all i did was try to hold your hand
am i the reason you are in so much pain
because i always have you on the brain
visions of you driveing me insane
hopeing we would be together once again
but if i'm the one causeing you pain you'll end up dead
so i pray every night that your safe and will do alright
but as long as your on my mind
i will have nightmares and think of you all the time
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2006-04-19 18:24:45]
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Re: what i see
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by Lilly-Quill on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:44:01 PM AEST
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This sound a bit like triune-love, without the physical complications setting in (as yet). We all know that few really learn from history, and "when you play with fire you get burned." But it's the element of "that burning," or surprise, that really catches us by surprise; especially when it comes to triune-romances. Take care.
Interesting and dangerously provocative~!
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