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Parallel
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:09:36 PM in AEST
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Fairy spirits of the breeze-
frailer nothing is than these.
Fancies born, I know not where..
in the heart or in the air.
Wandering echos blown unsought,
far from crystal peaks of thought;
shadows fading at the dawn,
ghostly feelings, dead and gone.
For not in all my teeming years
has glory brought these smiles and tears
or through the skies did musings roll
to a sweeter or more noble soul...lol
Alas! Are all fair things that live
still lovely and as fugitve?
Man On High Copyright April, 2006
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Man_On_High
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Re: Parallel
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:22:57 PM AEST
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flowing and beautiful Billy, I dont want to see your sweet soul go, that makes me sad. I hope that this isn't the last of your brilliant poetry I will see.
Michelle |
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Re: Parallel
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:48:13 PM AEST
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such a great write..every line is perfect (in my humble opinion)...i really love it, bro.
i hope that the "foreseeable" future is shorter than is supposed, and that you'll be posting again soon...
wiz |
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Re: Parallel
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 01:43:42 AM AEST
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~*Billy*~
I know i'll never fully understand
Why u packed up and went away
I still remember when we met
In 2005 exactly on the 25th of May
I know you've had many down days
Know that you are not alone my friend
There is a promise of a new tomorrow
Your aching heart shall soon mend
Stand tall my friend you are brave
I have my utmost faith in you
You'll overcome all obstacles
You'll rise in everything that you do
Til time is greater and kind enough
It's not goodbye but see you later
You'll set direction our way again
Sailing shall be on smooth water
Til later sweet guy. You'll always have a special place in my heart. Take care.
Love always and forever ur friend/fan,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 10:22:25 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful. you'll be back..sooner then later i hope. stay strong, and just as suzie said....it's not goodbye, it's see you later. |
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Re: Parallel
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 03:15:01 PM AEST
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| i will miss reading your wonderful works MOH, i hope all works out for the better. |
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Re: Parallel
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 07:11:38 PM AEST
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B~
'Tis with sadness that I read this, but what a piece to leave us with!!
Man oh man, this is beautiful!! Yet, I sense a tender angst in here as
well. B, you have such a glorious heart, [and yes, you know it!] It has
touched more than you realize, I dare say.
I have to join the others and implore you to not guard yourself too
long. Distressing it shall be to sign in and not experience the
brilliant and most exquisite writes that so easily and tenderly
flow from you. I shall miss them [you].
Don't stay away too long~
The sonnet was stunning hun. True mastery of words.
*hugs as always*
~Breezy |
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Re: Parallel
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 07:41:19 PM AEST
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Is there such a thing as the poets poem?
This may indeed be it!
Excellent write good sir! |
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Re: Parallel
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by brew on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:37:20 PM AEST
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A tear shed down the cheek of me
For you have what takes to Gleem...........An incrediable write for one who is trying to "find".........I do hope what ever your searching fo,r is, found Billy. To a wonderful guy, who had many talents, yet needs to find.......! Will miss the writes, yet YOU more.! You know im an e-mail away.! Please do come back, and hopes it find you happiness in the journey taken.!
ALways,
D |
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Re: Parallel
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 07:40:26 PM AEST
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Billy,
You are such a knight in shining armour, I mean that !What a poet, what a gentleman! God blessed you with an incredible Gift ,and I hope your heart mends and I hope you stay and continue to write endless poems...
LG |
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by JGB on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 01:31:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful!
Thank you. |
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Re: Parallel
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by Lilly-Quill on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:56:28 PM AEST
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Oh noblest knight, I'm sure there are many of us who've felt a fugitive from the law of averages. And yet, this muse is profoundly eloquence and really inspires me (for a fugitive theme).
Exquisitely ascribed~!
~Lilly-Quill |
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Re: Parallel
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:11:53 PM AEST
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This is horrible news. I can't believe just as I have become familiar with your work, you are leaving. You have such a deep talent and I fear I will not feel satisfaction for the cravings of your work soon.
Well I can only say that I hope to see you back sooner than later. I have taken my leaves from here as well. This said, to let you know I fully understand.
You have left us with a tremendous write here. A very moving and gripping piece fascinating my mind for more of your words. I do have one slight advantage to satisfy my selfishness to read your poems, that most of the others who commented dont. I have only been familiar with you for a short while, so I have catching up to do on your work anyway. I hope by the time I am caught up there is something fresh on your page.
Take care my friend. I wish you nothing but the best, and pray that you never lose that passion. I hope to see your words again soon.
- Daniel (SCM) |
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Re: Parallel
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:40:51 AM AEST
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Sir Billy, that's a fine poem, gentle in its rhyme and rhythm, and lovely in its theme. If this is a farewell, then I salute you and wish you well.
Andrew |
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Re: Parallel
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 07:18:09 PM AEST
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I read this and I thought of John Clare.(lol aside)I can pay you no more finer a compliment,
Den |
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Re: Parallel
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:32:02 PM AEST
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wow, moh strikes again!
a wonderfield write
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Re: Parallel
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 09:18:58 PM AEST
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sure is hard trying to catch up to all you fine poets and poetesses when I get in here at ypdc..
yes, well you know how it is .. things can get away easily.. what you do is this... open up the heart ... let the good things in... let slam that heart door closed tight and do not let anything good out... try it.. you'll like it...
RL |
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by nanb294eva on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:34:49 PM AEST
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Billy you can't stop posting here I will have no hope to hold on to. There will be nothing for me to look forward to like BIDING TIME.
This makes the tears roll down my face.
it make me wonder what's at your place.
for all this time i had high hopes with your poems here I had something to look forward to. Now I only have what I look at all the time, until you come back. this will be hard. I miss you enough now I have nothing. You have to write it's your destiny, it's what you do, it's what keeps me from going crazy, it's something that always made me smile....
and you....
xoxo
nancy
I know this is selfish of me, to say, dont stop posting it's all I have but I know your writing is what makes you complete too. noone writes like you your the best......you really are..and again i say you should have your own book.......you could be published...your that good, but you know that!!!!! LOL |
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