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Taking it Back
Contributed by
EVERxSOxSWEET
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Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:56:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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this bloody knife weighs down my shaking hand,
as i stumble across the floor,
waiting to sink the blade into your skin once again.
so maybe you would feel half the pain i felt,
as you wrapped me around your pinky finger.
in you i lost every ounce of innocence i had left,
and tonight, i'm taking it all back.
i'm taking back the empty promises, the lies, the tears and torment.
i'm taking back your so called love.
Copyright ©
EVERxSOxSWEET
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2006-04-19 22:56:31]
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Re: Taking it Back
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by Aspiring on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:00:18 PM AEST
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This is profound...i love it, i can really picture the scene in my head, and i like the last line.
Keep up the good work
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