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What's the point
Contributed by
slickfrank
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Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:39:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Whats the point of standing still, when you are always told to move
And when you show movement then theres someone who says they disapprove
Whats the point of seeing, if you are told to look away
And when you look away you miss the moment of the day
Whats the point of listening when you cant listen enough
And when you give your full attention and you still muck up
Whats the point of standing, when you are told to sit
And when you are sitting then you are told to stand
Whats the point of frowning when everyone tells you to smile
And when you smile you get made fun of for the smile you own
Whats the point of employment when you never meet the quota
Then when you do you do not make your parents or siblings quota
Whats the point of working hard in school when you never make the grade
And when you do you get yelled at by your parents just the same
Whats the point of being happy if all you feel is sad
And when you are happy this makes someone else mad
Whats the point of walking, when your always told to run
And when you are running then you ask what am I running from?
Whats the point of eating if you never feel full
And when you eat to your hearts content then you are called a pig or bull
Whats the point of having eyes of brown when blue is the one that nature should have gave
And if you had these eyes of blue then green would be the rave
Whats the point of asking when you are never told the truth
And when you are told then your question is stupid and aloof
Whats the point of awake when all you want is sleep
And when you sleep then you are told that you should be awake
Whats the point of being young if you are always told
Your making a fool of yourself and youll realize it when you get old
Whats the point you may ask well perhaps Ill never know
But if I ever figure it out then I wont be so low
Francis Majowski
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slickfrank
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2006-04-19 23:39:33]
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Re: What's the point
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 12:24:27 AM AEST
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a few of the rhymes sounded rather forced, but other than that, i absolutely loved it. great depth and insight, i was thinking the same thing....very nicely written, great rhythm.
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Re: What's the point
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 11:02:58 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking.
I don't like any one telling me what to but at 59 not many try.
Good work.
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