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Wasn't It You
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 08:22:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wasnt It You
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Wasnt it you,
Who tore down my walls?
Answered my pleading calls.
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Wasnt it you,
Who looked inside?
The inner me, I tried to hide.
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Wasnt it you,
Who sat me high?
On a pedestal reaching the sky.
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Wasnt it you,
Who offered love?
Unconditionally pure like a dove.
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Wasnt it you,
Who took my name?
Changed to sunshine what once was rain.
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Wasnt it you,
Who helped me find?
A companion until the end of time.
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Wasnt it you?
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2006-04-20 08:22:23]
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Re: Wasn't It You
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by Archie on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:53:03 AM AEST
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I like the simplicity of this. It reminds me of a song with a very different meaning.
"It was you, who put the clouds above me
It was you who broke my heart in two
It was you. . . who made my blue eyes blue"
Quote from "it was you" by Eric Clapton |
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Re: Wasn't It You
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by chaos78 on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 10:17:49 AM AEST
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| beautiful write |
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Re: Wasn't It You
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by ItsFELDER on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:08:12 AM AEST
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Touching poem, all it takes is one person to show you what you can truly be.
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Re: Wasn't It You
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 08:11:53 PM AEST
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Lovely thoughts, Jeff....
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