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My First Cherry
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:39:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The first time i layed eyes on you
the red all around
representing an instance, a rose
an entity, a expression of love
with that warm moist appearance
that i will eat
it's in fire, a burning heat
the only feeling left in my body
every other part is numb
still movements in this mouth, the tongue
resistance fails
to me you are princess
to you I am prince
shall get down and hail
I am ready
opens mouth
I am steady
now the time has come
for you are my first cherry
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Re: My First Cherry
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 03:49:11 PM AEST
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I liked this part:
The first time i layed eyes on you
the red all around
representing an instance, a rose
an entity, a expression of love
It's a nice write, I enjoyed it. |
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