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Nyctophobia
Contributed by
brasco
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Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 01:42:15 PM in AEST
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A dogs faint bark
The blackness of night
Enshrouding, cascading
Down to suffocate the light
Its dark tendrils
Searching, reaching
For a soul to engulf in shadow
A dogs faint growl
The black appendages spread
Not seeing, not knowing, not caring
Yet intent on subduing
The tiniest trace of moonshine
Attempting to play across a glistening eye
A dogs faint whimper
The wind falls still
The air close and stale
As the vice tightens
Drawing in, crushing
Stifling all in empty abyss
Copyright ©
brasco
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2006-04-20 13:42:15]
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Re: Nyctophobia
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by violet on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 03:42:11 PM AEST
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| I loved th wonderful use of words...describes the setting and atmosphere clearly....very good. |
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Re: Nyctophobia
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by Keilantra on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 05:33:38 PM AEST
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The tiniest trace of moonshine
Attempting to play across a glistening eye
B_E_A_Utiful choice of word s right there. |
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