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A Miracle at Stage Four
Contributed by
katt
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Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 02:54:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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The dark invader crouched low beginning the journey of destruction and death dripping deadly venom moving in secret seeking to devour vital organs to swiftly kill its prey unawares biding time till the machination is complete pausing for the final attack
behold a miracle from the Lord whose power from on high guided the hands of the physician giving him eyes of wisdom and understanding to lay bare the hiding place of the merciless dark invader then with blade held high and practiced medical precision he expertly slices and expunges the scattered cancerous growth from the body of my young daughter
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Re: A Miracle at Stage Four
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 08:36:11 PM AEST (User
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What a poem of faith, hope, love of God and victory in such compact syntax, meter and free verse. Most impacted on the finish up line ... "from the body of my young daughter." It's like I witnessed ya crossin' the finish line first in the big marathon race. Great work, katt. |
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