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BLANK AREAS
Contributed by
BEE
on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:53:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Blank areas
Im blocked by these dark figures
Lost in a blank area
Thrown threw walls
hiddin from all
and what is around me
hiding all feeling
from everything around me
and trying not to cry
but when all i do is get hurt
its hard
not to be trapped
and locked in these blank areas
not seeing anything
but tall black walls
hovering over me
not lettin these feelings come out
there all traped in a box
never to be let out
and never to be looked back on
all these blank areas
need to be filled
with good
BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-04-21 08:53:50]
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Re: BLANK AREAS
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 05:05:47 PM AEST
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| i like the urgent feeling in your technique, nice to see some unique style, great poem |
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Re: BLANK AREAS
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by gribbs on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 04:35:04 AM AEST
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| life is a canvass...to be experienced, in order to fill in the bland areas...nice write... |
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