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If He Knew
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 12:22:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wonder how he would feel,
If he knew how my heart peels
I wonder what he would do,
If he knew the ultimate truth
I wonder what he would say,
If he knew how my heart sways
I wonder if he would hate me,
If he knew I can barely breathe
All when he is around
I only hear one sound:
The beating of my heart,
As it starts to tear apart
I wonder if he even has a clue
What would he do if he knew?
Is there anyway he could love me?
Is there anyway we could ever be?
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Re: If He Knew
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 04:48:42 PM AEST
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I really like this poem..I love the 2nd stanza. I know i haven't commented on ur poems in foreve, But i haven't been on. do you remember me? well, n e ways i love rhis pems and i liked the ryming in it. As always, You're poems are awesome and you seem to get the point around. Awesome job!
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Re: If He Knew
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by gribbs on
Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 05:19:00 AM AEST
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| life is much too short to wonder...if only....good words of unkown love... |
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