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BEHIND HER SMILE
Contributed by
Adelle
on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 12:51:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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behind her smile shimmering and beautiful behind her smile so radiant and full she sends a message and decieving it is... for behind her smile so contagous and catchable is a broken heart, a saddened soul where deep inside tears fall emptiness and sorrow through her heart burns a hole for happiness is only at the surface of her smile catchable yet untruthful hopeing and praying someone would notice and see deep inside her secretive eyes and the defining marks on her face and see the way her cheeks fall so delicate and fragile and long to touch her soft face and ask if they can sit and stay for a while and talk and show interest in her cover up and shed a tear or two so she might not have to and ask her if she wouldnt mind unhiding and show that rare beauty of deep love and hurt and vulnerability
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is there someone out there that is willing and does care? that would want to uncover my broken smile and ask to stay for a while?
Copyright ©
Adelle
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2006-04-22 12:51:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: BEHIND HER SMILE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Adelle on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 03:45:39 PM AEST (User
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the sentance that says
"for a while and talk and show intrest in her coverup" is supposed to be two sentances...
its suppose to go like this:
for a while and talk
and show intrest in her cover up:)
sorry it was just bugging me... |
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Re: BEHIND HER SMILE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Faust on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 09:33:34 PM AEST (User
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This is a marvelous poem. and don't worry..eventually we all find someone..eventually.... |
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