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I hate goodbyes
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 05:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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One day you say
You want to kill it all away
And with a tear in your eye
You say your last goodbye
And you leave me here alone
While your flesh turns to bone
The sadness overwhelms
And the feelings never heal
The sadness and the guilt
Take over any good memories built
And when all is said and done
Your just another sad poem
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surge_joebot
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2006-04-22 17:52:57]
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Re: I hate goodbyes
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by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 06:36:47 PM AEST
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a poem that brings out the feelings of the survivors of the person who commited suicide. i dont see too many of those. good job,
~lexy~ |
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Re: I hate goodbyes
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by ham323 on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 07:46:33 PM AEST
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| Very deep. I like the way it's written. Good work! |
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Re: I hate goodbyes
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by redtears on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 09:39:36 PM AEST
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| awesome poem! i loved it! keep posting! |
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Re: I hate goodbyes
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by Tiffyo4 on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 05:56:43 PM AEST
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i like it alot keep up the good work
Tiff |
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