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Please wake up
Contributed by
ashleigh4
on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Please wake up, from this nightmare of life,
i'm weary and over the trouble and strife.
i hate alll the crying, the tears that i shed,
so wake up, please, ashleigh, get out of your bed.
Wake yourself, ashleigh, get out of this dream,
so absurd and repulsive, i long just to scream.
this dream is so scary, i i want to awake,
i'm so tired of sleeping, this life is so fake.
Please wake up, ashleigh,
you're sleepwalking again,
your sleepiness dulls
this incredible pain.
Open your eyes, girl,
and wipe tears away,
tomorrow, you'll wake up
to a different day.
But until then, be strong, girl,
and open your eyes,
and see all your scars
and the times that you've cried.
Copyright ©
ashleigh4
... [
2003-02-03 09:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Please wake up
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by D-Day on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:03:53 AM AEST
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| This is a very good poem, and I hope you do wake up from your sleep. When you do wake up there is a lot of things out there to discover. For a long time I was in my own nightmare and coudn't get out. Even now I'm about half awake, but it is still getting better. We all go through hard times, but you have to remember that it is only for a certain amount of time, and once you get through it, life is great. "Everything is ok in the end, and if it's not, then it is not the end." |
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Re: Please wake up
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by M on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:28:59 AM AEST
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| This is so good, and so very true, you will wake up one day, i hope, keep going until then though ashleigh, and tomorrow will eventually come as a different and better day. |
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Re: Please wake up
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by Patterz on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 02:42:35 PM AEST
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| This is one of ur best... :-) |
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Re: Please wake up
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by SpreadYourWings on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 10:49:23 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem Ashleigh. I could really feel your pain... |
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