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Reflect
Contributed by
BloodyTearDrops
on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 10:13:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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As I go on my way,
I take glance at my mirror each day,
To see if I look okay.
Constantly I compare,
How people look and what they wear,
Because inside I really do care.
But I never seem to feel,
Like my beauty is ever real.
I'm always criticizing me,
Judging me and revising me.
Why can't I accept,
The image that I reflect?
...As you look at me each day,
...Do you think I look okay?
...Do you compare me to how they look,
...Or what they wear?
...Do you even care?
...Do you feel my beauty is real?
...Why are always you criticizing me,
...Always judging me and revising me?
...Why can't you accept the image that I reflect?
...Why cant I accept me for being me?...
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Re: Reflect
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by Lilbabe on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 09:24:32 AM AEST
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i always criticize myself & i feel like im never good enough. so i can relate. i like the way you arranged your words, too.
~lexy~ |
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Re: Reflect
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by classicfailedhero on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 11:05:46 AM AEST
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| very nice write- nice structure and all |
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