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Bleeding Kisses
Contributed by
frozensuicide
on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Bleeding kisses are like a thousand needles,
You never know when to quit.
The sweet sensation of bloodstained battles.
The act of suicide you are about to commit.
Bleeding kisses on your arms,
so lucky you have them.
bleeding kissing with all sorts of harms,
not caring about them.
Bleeding kisses of razor blade cuts,
how exception and happy you are.
dripping blood down your arms are charms,
the burning sensation is bizare.
burning kisses are like candy,
you cant wait to have another.
to feels so good to see the burgandy,
cutting in any weather.
fires burning in your soul,
you take your last step of life.
digging to deep into your pole,
a pool of blood from that stupid knife.
bleeding kisses have its downs,
you might not have wanted to die.
you might have wanted to feel the love and take a couple of rounds,
but now in the ground is where you'll lye.
bleeding kisses on your lips.
bleeding kisses is your death.
not caring on how mny trips,
today, your taking your last breath.
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frozensuicide
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2003-02-03 17:40:00]
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Re: Bleeding Kisses
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by kangarose on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 09:03:58 PM AEST
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| great write, shows the pain of love lost at least that is the way i read it.. keep up the great work |
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Re: Bleeding Kisses
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by ml02 on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 10:43:13 PM AEST
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| awesome write |
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Re: Bleeding Kisses
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by nightrider on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 08:48:29 PM AEST
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| this is a great write... it sounds familiar in some way... i hope that when i die, its because i chose to take it that far, not because it was an accident... |
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Re: Bleeding Kisses
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 02:05:46 PM AEST
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Wow this was so good and so clear in your point I loved this it was simply amazing.
Your friend,
Joel |
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