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The Morning After
Contributed by
UrbanFlower
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Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 10:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Empty bottles stand tall
Taller than you can ever comprehend
Shimmering in the moonlight
As though taunting you as you lie in the wake of this personal disaster.
Ash spills from your hand
Charring the remnants of forgotten innocence
Leaving you tainted beneath the darkened sky.
All light grows dim
The sky opens up
Drenches you with promises
Then steals them away with the first glimpse of the sun
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UrbanFlower
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2006-04-24 22:41:07]
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Re: The Morning After
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 04:57:09 AM AEST
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Great writing but positive thinking will make it better.
good thought provoking work of art.
huggs,
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