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Beaten
Contributed by
Heretic
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Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:03:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My emotions have beaten me.
My life is nothing but tears.
I see life as a blur,
When my vision clears I see one thing.
It is that which torments me.
It is that which kills me.
It is the reasons for my tears.
It is my emotion.
It is my passion.
It is my hate.
It is my anger.
It is my love.
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Heretic
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2006-04-25 09:03:47]
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Re: Beaten
(User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:16:17 AM AEST
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Dear, your poem is the ultimate evident that you are a human., if you could win over emotion.
passion.
hate.
anger.
&
love.
You will become God. A thought provoking poem.
FRANCO
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Re: Beaten
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:46:39 AM AEST
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It is not whether you feel that controls you it is what you do with your feelings
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Re: Beaten
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by sararose1950 on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:30:39 PM AEST
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Beaten?? never!! You have won by writing about it. You are offically a poet!!*smiles*
Peace and Light! |
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