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I Can't Say
Contributed by
Scorpio_poet
on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:18:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Ive been through the fire all of my life
Striving to find wholesomeness
Ive been fooled by my own blindness
One lover to the next
Played not knowing my selfs worth
And feeling so empty inside
Stuck with my lover driven by hope
That A chance true happiness would begin
And so I plot, I plan, I adjust
Never again to be trapped
Enslaved no more by lies and deceit
I travel alone to find myself
Guided by faith I walk down a lonely road
Praying for the day to be free
Laughing and talking being amongst friends
Until the day Im swept away by a hand
A grasp of energy, I spend and feel lightheaded
High on desire to be felt the right way
Tipsy from the movement oh so gentle
Hypnotized by kind words so true
Enchanted by the eyes of a new found love
Filled with passion upon a sweet embrace
I take unto thee sweetened bliss
And never to be separated
Damn, It feels good, oh so good
The passionate flow of an electrifying thrust
I cant fight it any longer
I want to fully open up and say sweet words
I want to just break away from a past filled with betrayal
But if I do this will I be repeating a nightmare?
You seem to have that IT factor
Cool, calm and collective
You Intrigue me in a way no one can
Opening doors I locked for so long
I laugh and smile feeling fine and free
So whats the use of holding it all in?
I look into your eyes once more
My lips begin to move
I stammer at the tip of the tongue
I grow weak because of vulnerability
I, I cant say
Im protecting myself
Your hands feel so soft and inviting
I, I cant stare into your eyes
I feel your soul piercing through my heart
Such an angel
I, I cant say
I ..Love..
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Re: I Can't Say
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:28:58 AM AEST
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welcome to ypdc..
This was a very well written poem.. I can relate. I have been bruised and broken because of relationships that seemed like they would last.. Trying to hold on but it falls apart and corrupts.. I had blocked myself off and i didn't let anyone into my heart.. afraid of another failure another mistake.. But my best friend had found his way into my heart and at first i was afraid to open up to let him in completely.. Actaully let him in at all.. I didn't want to end up losing someone again because i would've died because of the pain.. But i did let him in and at first i wouldn't let myself say i love you to him because i just couldn't i had my walls up and strong but eventually i realized that he honestly loved me and i broke down and we have been together for three months..
It is hard when hearts have been broken in the past to fall in love again.. To feel that feeling..
Great poem..
Take care
christina |
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Re: I Can't Say
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:33:51 AM AEST
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| This is a good write and one i can get in touch with right away. One day when you can discern between real love and infactuation true love will appear. The best thing to be is patient and that is what i see in your poem. That is a hard lesson to continue to learn but you wrote it well here |
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Re: I Can't Say
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 02:57:35 PM AEST
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| This was a well written poem .. and thanks for sharing it and this is so true... |
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