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the heavens
Contributed by
jay89
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Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 07:26:14 PM in AEST
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The heavens
I look up to the clouds and see your lovely face.
You reach to me and pull me closer to your heart,
Looking in my eyes only to see the love I have for you.
Keeping me in your grasp only to realize we were meant to be,
Hoping to wake up in the morning, roll over, and see your handsome face.
I look up to the clouds and see your heart warming smile,
You reach to me only to notice that Im already by your side to ride or die
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jay89
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2006-04-25 19:26:14]
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Re: the heavens
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 03:06:27 PM AEST
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That is a wonderful proclamation of love. Very nice poem you have there.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: the heavens
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 08:08:30 PM AEST
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This seems to me to be a quick (though thought-filled) snipit of devotion. Is it my imagination or do I interpret a passed loved one? The handsome face in the morning seems only a hope; seeing the heart warming smile seems a knowing.
wabl
KenMoore
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