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Eight Years of Lies and Deciet
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 11:28:02 AM in AEST
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Your excuses and defenses are invisible to me
I see right through your supreme falsity
Your obliviousness offends me, your words are so fake
My individuality you reap and you take
Forgiveness overdue but I cannot suffice
For this time youre wrong, Im the one who is right
Friend of eight years, you dishearten me
I try to explain but you still do not see
My tears, they are real, have you forgot?
As I cry in pain you just stand and watch
You see nothing wrong, you think all is fine
But right in your face, there I am crying
So thanks for the knife in the back, my dear friend
Deliciously deceiving like all else that you send
Corrupt and misleading youve been these eight years
Ive just finally noticed youre not worth my tears
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Re: Eight Years of Lies and Deciet
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 09:46:34 AM AEST
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This is a very well written piece, I found it flowed of the tongue.
Onto the meaning of the poem...
I was once told you can count your true friends on one hand I was about 15 at the time and thought B******** I've got loads of friends!
But as I've got older I've realised that is one of the truest statements I've ever heard.
Great work.
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