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No-one is there
Contributed by
lady_daisy
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Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 08:41:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No-ones there
they all transform
and spread their wings.
Forever bounded
in this head of mine
never shedding this cocoon
I have so happily spun.
No-ones there
theyve changed
their masks pulled from them.
Forever a drifter
drifting aimlessly
never can I seem to find
myself in this reality.
No-one is there
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2006-04-26 20:41:20]
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Re: No-one is there
(User Rating: 1 )
by redtears on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 09:13:10 PM AEST
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| i really like it! its really intresting! |
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Re: No-one is there
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by moses on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 09:19:41 PM AEST
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I love how you don't use the same old format that everyone else uses. It's creative and different yet conveys a great/deep message.
Loved it/keep up the the good work,
-moses |
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