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What I Think
Contributed by
redtears
on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 08:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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What I Think
The days of my life whirl by in silence.
My thoughts flow through my mind.
I cant keep up with them.
Thoughts of life and death.
Should I try to survive?
Or give in to the darkness.
I think about my cold, heartless emotions.
Where I got them from.
The darkness is closing
And I finally show my emotion.
By breaking down and crying,
All alone trapped with only my thoughts.
These thoughts will not save me
From the gathering darkness.
For another time I wish I could turn them off,
Erase them, wipe them away.
Fill my mind with happy, musical thoughts.
But they are gone and perhaps were never here.
redtears
April 2006
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2006-04-26 20:59:26]
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Re: What I Think
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by Asthenia on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 09:14:48 PM AEST
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| wow, I liked this a lot...I can definately relate to it. it was pretty dark and pretty sad...this made me feel...something, I'm not exactly sure what, but something. Good job |
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