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LAYING HERE
Contributed by
BEE
on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:13:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Laying here
I lay here everynight....
Thinkin
And thinkin
If u really love me
Cuz its hard
Havent seen u
Herd u
Felt u
In witch felt like
Millions of heart beats
As my mind blows
Blows through the terrian
Of wen we first kissed
I thought i would never
Get that chance again
But as i knew that i was better
Becouse of u
And i knew only better things could come
And time past of ur beauty
Just laying here thinking
BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-04-26 22:13:45]
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Re: LAYING HERE
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:50:23 PM AEST
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You have written a good romantic poem, the plus of a lone laying heart is very well projected. Good work friend; keep romancing. For inspirations.
FRANCO
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Re: LAYING HERE
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 11:05:51 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, sweet, senous write.
huggs,
emy
Awesomely romantic. |
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Re: LAYING HERE
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:41:29 PM AEST
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This is a very good write. I really enjoyed it.
Jeff
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