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Looking in from...
Contributed by
markymark
on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 08:32:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I'm looking in... from the outside
i'm wishing i was wrong
i'm wondering what tomorrow...will bring along
i'm looking in but just cant see
you looking out...can you see me
i wish i'd never known you... i wish we never met
tomorrow seems so far away
i wish i had the time to say
sorry justs another... side of regret...
I'm laughing here...no offence
humour makes it more intense
took a while to find you...i'm sorry now i did
blank expression there to greet
the only one you'll ever meet
think you won...but taste defeat
close the coffin lid...
Who am i...where do i stand
i've sought the thought... but dont understand
why i felt that
you knew me
i'm looking in...cant you see...
I'm looking in from the outside
looking straight at you
your looking out...what can you see
i bet its not my view
draw your curtains...close your blinds
we found our souls...and lost our minds
i wonder what tomorrow
has in store for me and you...
Leave me here, i'm just being me
no point in looking...what'll be will be
time for me to leave...i will
my name is etched...on your window sill...
MDM...26/07/02...
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2002-07-27 08:32:59]
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Re: Looking in from...
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 09:43:11 PM AEST
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You've been busy writing some very good pieces Mark...each one is just great...this is so well written.
Love
Chrissie xx |
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Re: Looking in from...
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by Firefly on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 05:10:52 AM AEST
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| I loved this, mark! firefly |
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Re: Looking in from...
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by markymark on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 07:29:34 AM AEST
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| Thank you firefly for your kind words...nice to know when what you write is even been read...thanks again...Mark ... |
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