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Anger
Contributed by
big_B
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 07:41:04 PM in AEST
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It is uncontrollable, its a raging beast inside you
And you dont know if you can control it anymore
So you bust out, releasing the strength of the beast
It releases a shockwave of mayhem, chaos, and rage
Once its released, there is no controlling it
Adrenaline courses through your body, making you feel invincible
You attack, not knowing the consequences
He is down and out, your beast runs back to its dwelling
The authorities come, looking at the body, looking at you
And while your getting hauled off your thinking, What have I done?
Hes going to the morgue, and so will you, all because the beast inside you
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2006-04-27 19:41:04]
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Re: Anger
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by ham323 on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 08:09:35 PM AEST
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| Wonderful Poem. I loved how you referred to the anger as "The Beast." Good work! |
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Re: Anger
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 08:30:35 PM AEST
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this is awesome...if only because of the honesty-
a very brave write...
B |
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Re: Anger
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by slogan on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 08:34:12 PM AEST
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| sometimes its better just to laugh at that particular individual, turn around and walk away.. this will save you a lot of hardship down the road after you've had time to calm down and think about what actually occurred and the consequences that you must now face and learn to lived with...trust me I know...great write...jh |
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Re: Anger
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by BrokenXbyManyX on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 09:27:14 AM AEST
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That's exactly how I feel. Anger is a big part of my life. When it let it out, it feels SO right. After "the beast" is unleashed you think, "wtf have i done?" You want 2 go back, but you can't. It's frustrating.
This poem touched base with me in my life today. Good job. Very in your face. Luvs it!
l8ter.
Lauren |
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