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Breathe
Contributed by
redtears
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:26:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Breathe
Sometimes I find myself crying,
From pain of loneliness.
Ill wake up to feel that Im holding my breath,
Unable to breathe.
I realize this and gasp,
Wishing I didnt notice,
My lungs bursting for air.
I want to hold it and disappear from the world.
Escape from the darkness,
Hold it until my heart stops beating
And I find stillness..............
redtears
April 2006
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redtears
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2006-04-27 21:26:18]
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Re: Breathe
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:35:26 PM AEST
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this is fantastic..
soul baring-
and with great composition coupled with such a subtle rhyming scheme.
in this, they fit together perfectly.
5-
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