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my one true love
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 11:38:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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one thing i seek
and i hope to find.
one mans true love
a sheer devine.
i've search the world,
one thing i don't see.
one mans' true love
longing for me.
with arms around me
a kiss ir two.
it's what i need
and i need it too.
but what can i do
if noone is there.totally alone
totally unfair.
i'll stand my grounds
and face my will
one step at a time
loveless still
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freda_burrel
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2006-04-27 23:38:01]
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Re: my one true love
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:01:33 AM AEST
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I like this poem. It is bittersweet to me; bitter because I remember so well how it feels to long for love; sweet, because I know your "one true love" is out there somewhere and that you will find each other. It is only a matter of time. Good job.
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