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Daytime Dreamer
Contributed by
Aeicha
on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 12:08:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Below the face of midnight's waries
I dream beneath the willow
of the moonlit fairies
Gazing softly at the mermaids' thrones
while I blindly skip my last wishing stones
I listen for the hammers of the ruddy ones
who worship the earth and mock the sun
I hear the siren's hypnotic tune
and grieve for a sailor's impending doom
I lie in the flowers of a lily sprite
and dance in the rythem of Luna's light
I hum the melodies the wood nymphs sing
and fly among the stars between unicorn wings
I give my praises to the Goddess orbs
and wear the symbol of witch's lore
I long for tales of destined glory
and the endless meanings of fairytale stories
I give my tears to Neptune's waves
and navigate the labyrinth maze
I choose to believe in things unseen
and carry that faith forever with me
Innocent are the eyes of a child
with an imagination that is fiercly wild
Copyright ©
Aeicha
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2006-04-28 00:08:09]
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Re: Daytime Dreamer
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by xPixiexDustx on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 12:24:05 AM AEST
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| I love this, especially the last two lines. Very well done |
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Re: Daytime Dreamer
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:53:08 AM AEST
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This is an outstanding imaginative piece. I love the way you have incorporated the mythological charachters into the poem! I also love the subject. Never lose the capacity for "childish dreaming." I have addressed this subject myself in "The Dreamtime." Great write!
Butch |
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Re: Daytime Dreamer
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by Keilantra on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 07:07:16 PM AEST
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| Aeicha you are quickly beocming one of my favorite poets on the site. i absolutely love this poem as much as i loved The IN BEtween. Keep writing and i will keep reading. Amazing poets, i give my compliments, wonderful |
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