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Living Death
Contributed by
mazeof_darkness
on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 12:58:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Dead girl walking,
emotions cold.
A soul to far gone,
before it's old.
Change come to late,
everyone watch me fade.
Left behind, with no one
to blame.
Is life one big hard lesson?
Or just a real painful journey?
For my soul died while I
still live.
Forever my burden.
Copyright ©
mazeof_darkness
... [
2006-04-28 00:58:02]
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Re: Living Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 04:34:47 PM AEST
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great write with deep emotions...i liked it.
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Re: Living Death
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:46:05 AM AEST
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Very deep piece. A lot of people write to let out all the bad feelings they carry inside. It's actually a good thing. Thanks for sharing this.
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