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Fingerprints
Contributed by
Fayerine
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Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 02:37:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Fingerprints...
On the bedpost.
Fingerprints...
You left and never returned to take back.
Fingerprints...
On the mantel above the fireplace.
Fingerprints...
You left and failed to remember.
Fingerprints...
On the doorknob.
Fingerprints...
You left and didn't clean up.
Fingerprints...
On the gate.
Fingerprints...
You left.
Copyright ©
Fayerine
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2006-04-29 02:37:04]
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Re: Fingerprints
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 03:57:14 AM AEST
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Very creative writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fingerprints
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 04:02:20 PM AEST
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Pretty simple but very powerful. It brought a wave of sadness over me because I know it must have been hard for you to write this. It is very original and creative. I really liked it! Nice write!
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Re: Fingerprints
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by ---Alexis--- on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 05:16:11 PM AEST
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