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When You Find Someone
Contributed by
kaitee
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Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 01:54:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Young love is blind
When you think this age can find
The person you're gonna be with
For the rest of your life
Totally dependent on eachother's word
Thinking this way is totally absurd
Have a life while you're young
Be free, don't be strung
Having ties this early
You got no chance to live
Let loose, be wild, give all that you can give
BUT....if you find someone
Who's greater than the rest
Then it give a shot, baby, give it your best
Don't let them slip right through your fingers
You'll regret it, and man, that the worst of all stingers
If you're gonna go for it, do it with all you got
Don't be half in, or someone'll steal your spot
Always remember half and half don't make a whole
But it's 2 full people, 2 full souls
It's just the way it works
That's the way it's gotta be
So be sure when you jump in
That you are filled completely
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kaitee
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Re: When You Find Someone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 04:53:23 PM AEST
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i like this poem. not sure why...but something about it is just amazing
- Bethani - |
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Re: When You Find Someone
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:07:44 PM AEST
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~*Kaitee*~
I like this poem quite alot. U are absolutely right if u are half hearted then forget it. Love is about being whole. You have done a fine job with this write. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
*warm hugs*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: When You Find Someone
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by ek_da_poet on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:59:25 PM AEST
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| half and half huh sounds like you were divorced and cheated on with lies better luck next time |
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