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endless
Contributed by
lady_daisy
on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 11:02:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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In the endless dimness of the lane
Only the moon shines brightly
I see the reflection in the murky water
The luminous moon the sparkling stars
Oh what a wondrous sight!
In the endless dimness of the lane
Sickly bodies wander aimlessly
I see their deranged faces
The expressionless expressions
Oh what a wondrous sight!
In the endless night lazing in the lane
An old building stands proudly
I see its flags raised high and still
The dried dull paint flaking away
Oh what a wondrous sight!
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2006-04-30 23:02:06]
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Re: endless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 03:05:10 AM AEST
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an interesting juxtaposition. Almost abstract in genre. A life observation or more literal meaning....a mystery to me.
Creative. |
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Re: endless
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by redtears on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:30:13 PM AEST
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| wow, wish i could say more than that |
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