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Mind Working Slow
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 02:58:50 PM in AEST
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Mind Working Slow
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Lately, my mind has been working slow,
I think the mechanics are on the go.
Its hard to concentrate on here or there,
You might catch me in a dead-end stare.
Cant write a lick, cant think at all,
Instead of speeding, I can barely crawl.
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Lately, my mind has been shutting down,
Sometimes I swear its not around.
It goes one way, then stops in its tracks,
It should be racing, but its too relaxed.
Did the mouse fall off the spinning wheel?
Confused is the only way I feel.
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Lately, my mind has been playing tricks,
I wish I knew how to get it fixed.
Is there a doctor around how knows the cure?
I need so help, thats for sure.
Oh help me, help me, help me please,
Everything is loose, Im afraid to sneeze.
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Re: Mind Working Slow
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by kiss4roq on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 11:22:26 AM AEST
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| hehe. We're all losing our minds :0) Cute poem. Love the rhythm. You are very talented. |
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Re: Mind Working Slow
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 03:33:15 AM AEST
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I hear ya. I think we all get this way at times.
Very cute write.
huggs,
emy |
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