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WHAT DO YOU DO? WHAT DO YOU SAY?
Contributed by
jgb
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Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 11:54:58 PM in AEST
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WHAT DO YOU DO?
WHAT DO YOU SAY?
What do you do?
What can you say?
He disappears
Its not his fault
Its ours!!!
Do rules matter?
I guess not!
What matters then?
His dreams are fatter?
No one knows
Whats in his head!
No one knows
What has been said!
What matters to him?
No one knows
But him and God
The stories told
Not gold.
Just old!
Lies, Lies, so many lies
Sneaking and lying
What if he died,
Because of his lies
And could not be found?
The sweet little one
Who is down!
Or whatever it may be.
Dont think hes free!
Wishing hed stop
But what good is that?
Little importance
Insubordinate
His way!
No way!
Will not sway..
What do you do?
What do you say?
Nothing,
Not even today!
Just dont know
Which way to go..
Joanna G. Barber
Tuesday, May 02, 2006
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Re: WHAT DO YOU DO? WHAT DO YOU SAY?
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 12:25:42 AM AEST
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It ‘s a distinctive style adopted by my poet friend in this poem. The subject has been handled with great depth, those who had gone through the bizarre life style during their teen can easily relate these verse in their life. Good work friend you spoke through your heart yet again.
FRANCO
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Re: WHAT DO YOU DO? WHAT DO YOU SAY?
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by Sparkz16 on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 01:40:32 AM AEST
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| i really like this poem it speaks alot you never know what to say or what to do when you catch some1 doing something they shouldnt do |
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Re: WHAT DO YOU DO? WHAT DO YOU SAY?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 06:37:26 PM AEST
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The stubborn of the teenage years. A source of severe frustration. Reason, values, safety. pshaw pshaw. I am teenage, I am invincible. It's kinda funny how much smarter the teenager's mom and dad are when life teaches him some humility. Don't lose faith, there's a reason for everything.
Great, heartfelt write.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: WHAT DO YOU DO? WHAT DO YOU SAY?
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:36:37 AM AEST
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| an amazing piece |
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