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I Want To Break Your Heart
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 10:05:53 PM in AEST
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We arent all that different
No, weve all been hurt before
Weve lost our fights
And earned our scars
And learned love can be war
We build up our defenses
And we hide behind these walls
We live our life
From day to day
We pray we'll never fall
And then one day it happens
That right someone comes along
They make us take
A look inside
Decide we might be wrong
Now
I can see you
And I can tell
I want to break your heart
Out of its shell
Shine a light into
The darkness that you dwell
I want to break your heart
I want to break it well
The distances between us
Now dont matter much at all
Forget the truth
To get to you
On hands and knees, Ill crawl
I pray that you believe me
And that youll let down your guard
A leap of faith
Is all it takes
I wont let you fall too hard
Cuz
I can see you
And I can tell
I want to break your heart
Out of its shell
Shine a light into
The darkness that you dwell
I want to break your heart
I want to break it well
You cant tell me you dont hear me
You cant tell me you dont see
You cant tell me youre not sorry for
The way things used to be
Everybody wants somebody
They can call their own
You may have built a castle but
Alone it aint no home
And
I can see you
And I can tell
I want to break your heart
Out of its shell
Shine a light into
The darkness that you dwell
I want to break your heart
I want to break it well
I want to break your heart
I want to break it well
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2006-05-02 22:05:53]
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 11:02:36 PM AEST
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wow...that was completely amazing. i'm blown away beyond words (well..almost beyond words). this sure did take me by surprise, as you alluded it would.
wow, those last two lines are perfect, as is what precedes.
i look forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 11:12:52 PM AEST
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Bravo! This poem's message is one I've belabored more than once, but never quite so well, methinks. The refrain, especially these lines -
I want to break your heart
Out of its shell
I want to break your heart
I want to break it well
- simply brilliant! Well done, Scott, well done indeed.
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 11:15:35 PM AEST
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I totally agree with Wiz there.
I think this may be your best work yet. |
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 11:27:08 PM AEST
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Snazzy, this turned out even better than I had imagined when you first
told me of it's conception. Brilliant in all it's insinuations and declarations.
You outdid yourself with this one, hun. Truly a masterful write.
And that title (and thoughts therein) are deceptive to a point, you little
trickster. Well done. Your cleverness never disappoints.
This is an easy favourite.
~Breezy |
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 05:13:15 AM AEST
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You were right, that poem was diffrent from what the title alludes to. Very nice work, very nice indeed. It is a love poem, one that I have tried to right many a times, but have failed each time. Keep up the good work.
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by Nothingness on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 08:41:50 AM AEST
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Wow very nice write has a lot of strong emotion and flows very nicely I liked how I was consistent nice job
~nothingness~ |
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 12:01:55 AM AEST
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Scott,
OMG (and other endearing internet acronyms)! You completely floored me with this. I was execting something entirely different, which is why it was so thrilling to find out my expectations were wrong.
You are a superior talent, and among the elite on this site. Nothing you have ever posted on YPDC has been less than grand, yet you completely went beyond elite with this. I feel this is hands down one of your best and arguably the best I have ever read of yours. One hell of a write. I did not see that it was song lyrics until after I read it, but got that idea from the way you wrote it. Still, I had a rhythm in my head that played along and the words here just sung out loud to me.
Amazing job my friend!
SCM |
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:56:56 AM AEST
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sheesh man, you really have a talent there :) wish I could write with even a fraction of your talent, that was an amazing poem. You blew me away :)
hugs
Pix xx |
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:56:57 AM AEST
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sheesh man, you really have a talent there :) wish I could write with even a fraction of your talent, that was an amazing poem. You blew me away :)
hugs
Pix xx |
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:15:15 AM AEST
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Naz,
You remind me of the high jumper who gets better and better, and keeps raising the bar. It's as if your talent and creativity keep growing. This was a beautiful write/song, with some lament, some pain and yet much wisdom. I think your format often adds to the symbolism of your writes. Here it is like starting anew on the other side of the page.
Well done my friend,
Will |
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Re: I Want To Break Your Heart
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 04:54:07 PM AEST
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this is really great...I wrote one about putting up fences once. Not nearly as good as this..but same idea; kinda.
great write anyway D.M. |
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