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You Pretended
Contributed by
builtxforxsin
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Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 09:42:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You Pretended To Love
You Pretended To Care
You Pretended To Hold Me In Your Arms
You Pretended I Was There
You Told Me Forever
"I'll Love You Till The Day We Die"
It Took Me Till Now, To Realize You Lied
Now You Found Someone Else, Isn't He The Best!?
Does He Tell You He Loves You
And For You He'd Take One To The Chest?
I Gave You My All
But It Wasnt Enough
Through The Good and The Rough
I Just Wanna Hear You Say I Love You, One More Time
And Call Your Bluff.
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2006-05-03 09:42:38]
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Re: You Pretended
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by DamentedSuicide on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 10:18:42 AM AEST
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I think we've all felt this way at one point or another in our lives, wonderful way of putting it in words!
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Re: You Pretended
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by spider on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 03:09:45 PM AEST
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my boyfriend just cheated on me and that is exactly how i feel. its beautiful and painful at the same time.
its pretty damn good really.
and i'm guessing it;s one of your first poems as you've got no others in which case...even more amazing. |
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