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Funhouse
Contributed by
randumbchit
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Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 07:00:32 AM in AEST
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Funhouse?
Why do they call this a funhouse?
The purpose is to distort reality
My life has become just that
Distorted
The mirrors and smoke
Are the lies and deceit
That I find in all
The people I meet
I wish I could trust you
How do I know youre not fake too?
When life is a travesty
What can you do?
I try to stay true to myself
But I cant trust you
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2006-05-04 07:00:32]
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Re: Funhouse
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by Aquaelius on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:20:53 AM AEST
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Amen!!! I can't trust you either!!! Very true... the last stanza is great. Good write.
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Re: Funhouse
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by brooken_22 on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 10:53:20 AM AEST
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| excellent write.....i loved the simile......very nice......brooken_22 |
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Re: Funhouse
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by europeanprincess on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 01:11:15 PM AEST
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well written indeed. thank you.
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Re: Funhouse
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 09:13:21 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. The first stanza just lays it all out for the reader. Great concept. |
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