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The Rain
Contributed by
RMWilson
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Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:46:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The Rain
R.M. Wilson
As I walk below the cloudy sky
I see the rain drops fall
Strike the ground and die
To join together is their call
Forming such a little stream
Brothers together, they swim free
Togetherness their happy theme
Heading out to sea
Their journey ends
The sun breaks cloud
The brothers swirl and mend
The sky, their home, they crowd
I envy the rain
It falls then lives once more
And happy is their pain
Heaven is home for rains that pour
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RMWilson
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2006-05-04 11:46:46]
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Re: The Rain
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 03:06:33 PM AEST
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| I liked the piece. Maybe how you referred to the water droplets as brothers. Nice. Thanks for sharing. Peace, Laura |
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