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Fantasy, Desire, Gives way to Death
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I have only two choices To smile, shed a lonely tear for the lost saints Or I can sigh and carve my name in my skin Either way I don't win I find it hard to lock this pain inside Sometimes it surfaces to for all to see (cut, scar, or teer) But you tend to not notice You just fix your hair and drive away in your Lotus I'm fasting on happiness Been at the waters of misery for to long I gaze out of angry blue-gray eyes I swear at the world, don't give a ***** whatever my demise I look down a cliff, into the black abyss See the churning waters, eating up my tears My desire to jump impale myself upon the rocks It grows, but instead I find myself with two Glocks Blazin away at cops they'll never put me in locks Still I stare downward the wind rufflin my hair Drying my skin, my eyes. Destroying my fantasies Death calls my name with a razor I draw cuts I may look normal, but inwardly I'm going nuts I don't want to talk Then I will have to open my abused heart I'd much rather be found broken and bloodied My fantasy gives way to reality I raise my head intent and muddied I watch, as my hands start to shake My head starts to rock back and forth To the ground I plummet and fall I will hit the rocks, like an abused doll My body is wrapped in bloodied rags Throw my body in a pit I don't deserve the luxury of a coffin
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bobotheclown
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2003-02-05 01:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fantasy, Desire, Gives way to Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 09:03:12 AM AEST (User
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followed your poetic story death once and twice, did u use the glock or dive off a cliff? |
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Re: Fantasy, Desire, Gives way to Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by ashleigh4 on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 07:55:30 PM AEST (User
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wow... this is definitely one of the best poems u hav written. i love the last stanza, it captures how u (and many others, includin me) feel, well done mate xx |
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Re: Fantasy, Desire, Gives way to Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:09:33 PM AEST (User
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you definitely did well on this write. I do hope that you don't actually feel this much pain. ttys....hugs, kara |
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Re: Fantasy, Desire, Gives way to Death
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:32:18 PM AEST (User
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I feel so bad 4 u! But It was very well writen.
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