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opprobrium
Contributed by
lonely_boy
on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:16:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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drained
can't feel it anymore
stained
the carpet's redder than before
ashamed
why did i let you do it to me again
tamed
i've learned to let you win
scared
what will you sat this time
oblivious
to everything in sight
destroyed
by my lack of control
gone
never again will i have a soul
missing
the smiles we shared
regreting
the fact i even cared
Copyright ©
lonely_boy
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2006-05-05 02:16:51]
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Re: opprobrium
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by FireArchDruid on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:33:41 AM AEST
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| Different but I liked it. |
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Re: opprobrium
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by xAegisx on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 06:46:44 AM AEST
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| i like this poem a lot. a weird but good write i like the wording. |
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Re: opprobrium
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 03:15:53 PM AEST
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| I get this, BIG TIME!!!.........I would've liked to see the capitals and punctuation in the right place , but that said,.................I connected with this 100% |
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