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Fade
Contributed by
coral
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Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:36:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fade back to the dark where I came from
Back to the shadows where I belong
Back to the delights
Of sharing quiet nights
Left alone
In a city of ghosts forlorn
In an eternity of black
Down an abyssal track
A salutation
To my successful isolation
From the irksome
To the nothingness of reason
Copyright ©
coral
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2006-05-05 02:36:59]
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Re: Fade
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:29:54 PM AEST
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I like this.
nfortunately, I think the one bit that let it down was the word 'Fade'. I feel it is too overused.
Otherwise, I like this a lot. The rhymes are sharp, which is good, they take unexpected turns.
Good write.
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: Fade
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by Sasha on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 03:15:04 AM AEST
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| A beauty of a poem! I love this one! |
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Re: Fade
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 08:08:45 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful combination. Neatness and
and style and very enjoyable reading. Says
a lot though a dark poem, it has a wisdom
and self revealation. A worthy peice of dark
writting. nicely done.
*****
Ben |
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