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Thoughts of You
Contributed by
Zacattack
on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 08:11:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Loving you is all I need
I need you so much it feels like greed,
Youre a sin to all my desires
You make my heart burn like fire,
Not a day goes by when I dont have you on my mind
Im always thinking about you all the time,
I care for you & want you to know
Whatever we go through Ill love you so,
Its like a heartache battle when youre not here
I just know one day youll be near,
When that day comes I know life will be alright
Because when being with you gives me flight,
When you arent here I think of what to do
But what its worth Ill always love you.
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Zacattack
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2006-05-05 20:11:12]
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Re: Thoughts of You
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by ElliotRS on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 10:04:04 PM AEST
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It has a really good flow to it and its short and sweet..right to the point
I like it a lot. |
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Re: Thoughts of You
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by The_Young_Poet on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 10:40:15 PM AEST
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| me likes, a nice sweet poem |
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Re: Thoughts of You
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 09:14:47 PM AEST
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Aw, how sweet! Nice job, nice rhyming!
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